Page Mockups!!

Here is my first mockup of a front cover of my music magazine!! After the audience questionaire determined the name "Breakout" i've had to do some serious thinking on how the image will correspond to the name. As the name resembles new artists who are just breaking into the music industry i thought of the idea of having the model aka Lois, holding a vinyl up over her mouth- this will resemble that she is unheard of but will soon breakout of her silence.
The leading caption also corresponds to the name of the magazine and the image of the artist by saying that this new artist is ready to breakout into the music industry.
For the design/colour palette i have thought of using a bright pink background but altering with the colour to make it less bright, this can be done as my friends bedroom walls are bright pink which makes the planning and shooting much easier. I am undecided on the colour of the title of the magazine, i was thinking black but i want to play around with different fonts and styles first and see which will allow me to change colours etc.
As i have the other idea of using a duo as my main artists i am in the process of creating a second mockup then i will decide which i want to do. I am hoping to have my photoshoot done by Saturday.